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The words,
they resembled
feedback

the lips a tinted grey

The eyes
they shone
like amethysts

on a fog-filled, sidereal day

Overcast
Idlewild
Buckshot
Kill cycle

The thoughts
they
felt

the same as they did yesterday

The heart
it
raced

Just like…just like

Just like it always does
when you
wrench it out and squeeze it high
offering gentle reminders as to the many reasons why

Inclined
Pronate
Collapsable
Surrogate

Calamity
Tragedy
Polaroid

Indemnity
Visceral
Entities amongst

Causal
fingers
Scratching
still the pine above

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About hobgoblin2011

In 2012 I was 370 lbs, dealing with severe spinal injuries and miserable in every aspect of the word. Through hard work, dedication and the installation of self-belief, I changed everything about myself. It took 5 years to become the person I am today and I want to share everything I’ve learned during my transformation. Transformations aren’t solely about weight loss. I’ve learned that to truly transform you must change in many more ways than that. I hope to provide useful tips, information and motivation/inspiration to anyone who needs to make a Change themselves.

2 responses »

  1. I am awestruck, that last stanza is as haunting as it gets.

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    • hobgoblin2011

      Thanks Anna. Actually reworked the order of the words in the last line, as it came out differently in the free write. Really glad you enjoyed it.

      Reply

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